Monday, March 11, 2013

In Class Work Week 8
#2

My hands griped the armrests until my knuckles were white. I feared the thought of crashing. I glanced out the window to see down below. All I saw were lights that seemed to spread for miles and miles. They lit up the night and appeared to be closer than they actually were. A large silver disco ball was visible and said “Epcot”.
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Rain poured down creating large puddles we had to run through. People were running around the amusement park trying to stay dry. Out of the corner of my eye, I saw Nicky lose her flip flop in a puddle but I kept running toward a store. The next thing I know I’m on the ground, pain shooting through my leg.


1 comment:

  1. As I said, there's some irony to be squeezed out of these, especially if you give us a little more fear of injury in sentence 2--then we have the irony smack us hard in the last sentence.

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