In Class Work Week 8
#2
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Rain poured down creating large puddles we had to run through. People were running around the amusement park trying to stay dry. Out of the corner of my eye, I saw Nicky lose her flip flop in a puddle but I kept running toward a store. The next thing I know I’m on the ground, pain shooting through my leg.
As I said, there's some irony to be squeezed out of these, especially if you give us a little more fear of injury in sentence 2--then we have the irony smack us hard in the last sentence.
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