Thursday, March 21, 2013


Prompt #35

My three little cousins sat beside each other on the living room couch. They continuously glanced at each other nervously and didn‘t dare speak a word. My aunt and I stood in front of them with our arms crossed. Sitting on the coffee table was my uncle’s birthday cake which my aunt had spent three hours making. A half an hour before my uncle was due to be home, finger trails appeared all through the blue frosting. My aunt made my cousins sit on the couch until they confessed who ruined the cake. The three of them refused to admit what they had done even with their lips and tongues dyed royal blue as the frosting.

1 comment:

  1. Could not resist temptation, eh?

    What if the last line read: "The three of them sat in silence, not one of them willing to open his royal blue lips to confess."

    I'm tying to sharpen the amusement factor in that surprise ending. Do you think my version works ok?

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